The Write Way To Do Fetish Literature

     So lately I've read a lot of inflation/TF stories. Some of these pieces had great ideas and a lot of potential, but they fell flat because of poor writing skills. Therefore, I've decided to share my own personal writing tips with the community.

-First, map out the characters in your head. What defines them as a person? What makes them unique? How would they react to a situation? You can describe what they look like too, but a defined personality is the best way to make a character stick in your head. People will probably remember the kleptomaniac narcissist Deidra more than the busty blonde Darlene.

-Once you've got your characters, think about what's going to happen to them. You can have a structured story arc, or you can let your imagination run wild and let your tale sprawl out in whichever direction catches your fancy. I've personally used both methods, and there's no right way to do it. Keep in mind that each version has its ups and downs.

-OK, so we've set up our story, now comes the good part! This is why people are reading your story, so this should be your most engaging part. Don't be afraid to use vivid detail, which brings us to some very easy mistakes that anyone can make. Here are some don'ts. 

     -DON'T just tell us what's happening. Avoid cliches too. (e.g. 'Becky now looked like she was pregnant with twins.') Instead, try to find a new, interesting way to show us the inflation/TF. I make it a challenge to use an engaging, unorthodox description to convey the changes occurring in every new story of mine.

     -DON'T use the same words over and over again, especially if they are uncommon. Use a thesaurus to look up new synonyms to avoid becoming boring and trite. It adds a little zing to an otherwise mundane sentence.

     -DON'T make all your sentence structures the same. (e.g. 'Yolanda's breasts blew up. Her butt also inflated. Then her stomach started to swell.') This makes for a very dull read. Instead, try changing around subject or predicate positions, or adding clauses.

Here are some other miscellaneous tricks to spice up a story.

-Use plenty of dialogue. It should both stay true to the person speaking it while also remaining natural and flowing. Try actually saying the lines you wrote down for your character. You should usually be able to tell if it sounds stilted or awkward.

-Make sure you don't just leave your audience hanging after the inflation/TF has stopped. If you've done a good job with characterization, people will care about (or at least want to know) what happens to your victim after the fact. How do they adjust? What are some side effects or new obstacles? You should get the point.

-This is purely optional, but I personally like to inject my stories with witty humor and lots of irony. As trivial as this seems, sometimes it can really make a difference! Just think of how boring Guardians of the Galaxy would be if it didn't have any one-liners or pop culture references.

-Always double-check your story before submitting. Maybe there was a passive sentence you could spruce up, or a grammar mistake that you didn't notice before. Hold yourself to your personal level of quality and don't skimp!

That's about it for now, I think. I'll update this if I come up with anything else. I hope this helped!